Aching For Her Love

Sweet Jo · 02-07-2010, 05:15 PM

Aching For Her Love

CAST: My dream cast.

India-Stepmom 1
Georgia-Stepdaughter
Ginger-Stepmom 2
Ariella-India’s Lover
Kimber-Ginger’s Lover
Prinzzess-Student

India, the ex of Georgia’s father, now lives with Ariella. She and Georgia still have a close relationship, chatting daily. Ginger is the new stepmom. Kimber is Ginger’s longtime friend.

SCENE 1 – CLASSROOM
Prinzzess sits in an otherwise empty classroom – except for India, who asks if Prinzzess if ready for a make-up test.

P: I’m ready.

After hand the test to Prinzzess, India goes to the chalkboard. We get to appreciate India’s fantastic figure as Prinzzess stares at her lovely teacher writing on the board. Prinzzess squirms in her seat.

2 – CLASSROOM
Prinzzess, flushed, turns in her test.

I: Are you OK?

Prinzzess nods and steps out into the hall.

P (panting): Wow.

3 – INDIA’S KITCHEN
I (entering & talking on cell): I miss you, too. I know, it’s been at least four months since we’ve seen each other while your dad was on his honeymoon.

A (entering): Is my birthday girl home?

She sees India's on the phone.

I: How are you and Ginger getting along? PAUSE. You can’t expect it to be like it was with us. She’s young enough to be your sister, while I’m almost old enough to be your real mom. PAUSE. Thanks again for calling. I love you too, sweetie, but I don’t know if you should still be calling me ‘mom.’ I’m not even your stepmom anymore. PAUSE. Whatever makes you happy.

India hangs up.

A: How is Georgia?

I: So-so. I wish I could spend more time with her. But her dad... That’s why I stayed away from her birthday party last week.

A (her arm around India): You did leave the man for another woman... Now, why don’t we celebrate your birthday?

I: You promised. No fuss.

A: Right.

They exit. We hear, “SURPRISE!”

4 – GEORGIA’S LIVING ROOM
Ginger and Kimber are chatting. Georgia enters, a backpack over her shoulder.

Gr: Georgia, you remember my friend, Kimber?

Ga: Your maid of honor.

They say a quick good-bye. Georgia is spending the night at a friend's and won't be back until after Ginger picks up her dad at the airport the next day.

K: So?

Gr: I can’t believe we’re doing this.

K: We’ve got the house to ourselves.

Ginger recalls Kimber coming out. It made her “curious.” She can understand Kimber being attracted to other girls. She, herself, has been attracted to girls. Now Ginger, after four short months of marriage to Georgia’s dad, is realizing...

Gr: I've denied who I am. Who I want to be with.

K: You don’t have to deny yourself tonight.

5 – GINGER & KIMBER MAKING LOVE
Afterward...

G: I don’t think I can let this be a one-night thing.

K: I know, but I don’t want to be your mistress, either.

G: God, what will my parents think?

K: If it weren’t for his money, they’d been pissed about you marrying Frank. He’s so much older than you. At least, I’m your own age.

6 – INDIA’S LIVING ROOM
Ariella closes the door on the last of party guest. She joins India on the sofa.

I: I can’t believe you did this.

A: I guess you’ll have to spank me.

They kiss.

I: Maybe I’m too tired now.

A: You aren’t so old and tired that you’re going to pass up making love on your birthday.

7 – ARIELLA & INDIA MAKING LOVE

8 – INDIA’S LIVING ROOM (NEXT DAY)
Ariella opens the door. Georgia, weeping, shoots past her.

Ariella notes India is out running. Georgia had gotten home as Ginger, suitcase in hand, was leaving. Her father was ranting about “Ginger being no different than Georgia.”

G: He can't believe he married “another one.”

India enters. Georgia runs to her.

9 – INDIA'S GUEST ROOM
Georgia lies in bed. India enters.

I: I called your dad. He's fuming. I told him you’re 18 now.

G: When he was yelling about Ginger, I flashed back to when you and him broke up. It was like losing you all over again.

10 – GEORGIA’S BEDROOM
Georgia, with India, is packing.

G: Dad's probably taking his frustration out on some little white balls.

They discuss his outbursts about gays.

I: What are the odds he’d wind up marrying two of them? At least, Ginger didn't take 12 years like I did to figure herself out.

G: The way Dad talks about you and now Ginger. It’s scary. I mean, I thought I’d tell him I’m gay just to see how he’d react.

I: He’d curse the influence I had on you.

11 – INDIA’S BATHROOM
Georgia enters as India brushes her hair. Georgia wants to say good-bye before India goes to work.

G: I’ve really missed you. You’re so sweet. So understanding. So smart. So pretty.

I: You are all those things. Even prettier.

She kisses Georgia on the cheek.

12 – CLASSROOM
Prinzzess gets up from her seat to leave, but India stops her. Prinzzess did poorly on the test.

I: Is there anything on your mind? You seem distracted.

Prinzzess shrugs.

I: You know you can talk to me. If you’ve got problems, I’ll listen.

13 – INDIA’S KITCHEN
Georgia is rinsing dishes, handing them to India. Ariella sits at the table. She notices Georgia is transfixed on India—leaning in to sniff her perfume, sneaking glances at her as she loads the dishwasher.

14 – INDIA’S GUEST ROOM
India wakes Georgia.

I: Hey, sleepy head. With all the drama, you and I haven’t had a chance to catch up. I’m playing hooky, taking you out on the town.

15 –INDIA’S LIVING ROOM
Ariella opens the door for Prinzzess. The girl heard India wasn’t in school, skipped class and somehow found herself standing here. Ariella says India is out, but her bigger concern is the girl’s quivering. She invites her in.

16 – INDIA’S LIVING ROOM
Prinzzess sits on the sofa. Ariella brings her a glass of water. Prinzzess explains "finally getting the courage” to talk to India. She admits having a crush on India - thinks about her day and night.

A: I wish I could say something to make you feel better. I’m sure if you talked to...

P: You’re so lucky to be with her. I wish I could know what it is like to kiss her. To touch her.

When Ariella assures Prinzzess “someday she’ll meet someone,” the young girl interrupts her.

P: I thought someday might be today. Miss Summer would see how much I need her. Take pitty on me.

Ariella pulls the girl into her arms and kisses her on the forehead. Prinzzess kisses her back.

A: You should go.

Prinzzess begins weeping. When she rises, Ariella grabs her hand.

A: But I can't let you go so upset.

The two hug again. As they hold each other, Prinzzess can’t help touching Ariella, kissing her on the neck. The arousal in both women is ignited.

A (leading Prinzzess upstairs): I must be crazy doing this.

17 – ARIELLA & PRINZZESS MAKE LOVE

18 –INDIA’S LIVING ROOM (NIGHT)
India and Georgia enter. While India goes to find Ariella, we stay with Georgia. She pulls a book off the shelf, knocking a shoebox of photos onto the floor. She's surprised to discover nude images of India.

I (re-entering): I found her soaking in the tub. She says we need to “talk.”

She sees the photos.

G: Don’t be embarrassed. You’re beautiful.

I: I can’t believe Ariella talked me into posing for those.

G: They take my breath away.

Before she can say more, Ariella enters.

19 – ARIELLA & INDIA’S BEDROOM
India sits in bed. Georgia enters, saying Ariella left, mentioning she'll be staying with a friend.

G: What’s wrong? Is it my being here?

I: No. She had to be honest with me. One of my students stopped by. This girl has a crush on me. Was upset. When Ariella tried to “comfort” her, the two of them ended up in this bed.

G: I’m so sorry.

I: That’s what she said. She said she loves me and if I love her, I'll forgive her.

G: Someone who loves you, wouldn’t have hurt you like this.

I: I think I'm more mad than hurt.

India notes Ariella didn’t just sleep with another woman. She slept with a student. India is genuinely concerned about Prinzzess, “a sweet kid.”

Georgia gives India a hug. With a sigh, India declares she wants to put this behind her. She gets off the bed, leaving Georgia sitting there. She starts unbuttoning her blouse, when she notices Georgia staring.

G: I could see a student getting a crush on you.

I: Really?

G: I started sneaking peeks at you when I was 13. Haven’t you ever noticed how many times I’ve said you are so attractive. That’s because I’m attracted to you.

I: I had no idea you had those kind of feelings—that you’re attracted to women. That you’re attracted to me.

Georgia tells India to see her not as a little girl, but as a woman who loves India and longs to be loved by India. She kisses India.

I: Sweetie, I’m not sure this is a good idea.

G: The only way you could possibly hurt me right now is to reject me. Wouldn’t you want my first time to be with someone who loves me unconditionally? Someone who loves me the way you do?

INDIA & GEORGIA MAKE LOVE

20 – ARIELLA & GEORGIA’S BEDROOM
They wake up in each other’s arms.

I: So, what happens now?

G: Well, I think, first of all, I won’t be calling you ‘Mom’ anymore.

NEXT MOVIE
Georgia and Ginger? Georgia and Prinzzess or Kimber? Georgia and both stepmothers? Georgia, India and Ariella? Prinzzess finally with India?

Robertttt · 02-08-2010, 08:23 PM

Some good ideas, Jo. Obviously you put a lot of thought into this,& maybe Kay will respond. Oh, & welcome to the forum!

Sweet Jo · 02-08-2010, 08:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Robertttt

Some good ideas, Jo. Obviously you put a lot of thought into this,& maybe Kay will respond. Oh, & welcome to the forum!

Thanks Roberttt. You should see how much editing I had to do to get this down to 10,000 characters.

I wanted to do something different than a lot of GFF series/movies -- many of which touch on first-time experiences. My story includes that, but also has the loving long-term relationship of Ariella and India. Also, there seems to be a lot of titles like "Twisted Passion" or "Field of Schemes." My characters are already "established" lesbians or young girls who've come to realize that's their orientation. There's nothing "Twisted" about it. They just ache to be with the woman they are attracted to.

I know some might see this and think it would be slow-moving, but for me the best GFF scenes unfold gradually. There's a build up... tension... anticipation. (My personal favorites are the stories that also have a great deal of tenderness about them -- some affection to go with the attraction.)

Anyway, I hope Kay likes it. I really appreciate GFF's work.

Robertttt · 02-08-2010, 10:54 PM

I hope Kay takes a good look at it. I haven't seen her around in a while, though. There's obviously a lot of dialog & characterizations, so she might want to edit it somewhat, but it could happen. I'll keep my fingers crossed!

Amo Cinaedae · 02-09-2010, 07:44 AM

Nice thoughts, Jo! I have a question and a comment

Question: Ginger who? Certainly not Ginger Lee as a mother!

Comment: I am happy to see the mention of Kimber. I assume you mean Kimber Lace. She has only appeared a few times with GFF, but has played well. She is the sexiest broom stick I know! I don't mean that to be disparaging but funny, just a reference to the fact that sometimes a very thin girl can be exceptionally hot -- like Kimber! Please bring her back!

Cheers

Sweet Jo · 02-10-2010, 04:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amo Cinaedae

Nice thoughts, Jo! I have a question and a comment

Question: Ginger who? Certainly not Ginger Lee as a mother!

Comment: I am happy to see the mention of Kimber. I assume you mean Kimber Lace. She has only appeared a few times with GFF, but has played well. She is the sexiest broom stick I know! I don't mean that to be disparaging but funny, just a reference to the fact that sometimes a very thin girl can be exceptionally hot -- like Kimber! Please bring her back!

Cheers

Actually, Ginger Lee was who I had in mind -- my point being that she would be a very young stepmom, not much older than her stepdaughter.

Anyway, I'm not "married" to the cast I posted here. It's all just a suggestion.

02-07-2010, 05:15 PM	#1
Sweet Jo virgin Registered User Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 8 Rep Power: 0	Aching For Her Love Aching For Her Love CAST: My dream cast. India-Stepmom 1 Georgia-Stepdaughter Ginger-Stepmom 2 Ariella-India’s Lover Kimber-Ginger’s Lover Prinzzess-Student India, the ex of Georgia’s father, now lives with Ariella. She and Georgia still have a close relationship, chatting daily. Ginger is the new stepmom. Kimber is Ginger’s longtime friend. SCENE 1 – CLASSROOM Prinzzess sits in an otherwise empty classroom – except for India, who asks if Prinzzess if ready for a make-up test. P: I’m ready. After hand the test to Prinzzess, India goes to the chalkboard. We get to appreciate India’s fantastic figure as Prinzzess stares at her lovely teacher writing on the board. Prinzzess squirms in her seat. 2 – CLASSROOM Prinzzess, flushed, turns in her test. I: Are you OK? Prinzzess nods and steps out into the hall. P (panting): Wow. 3 – INDIA’S KITCHEN I (entering & talking on cell): I miss you, too. I know, it’s been at least four months since we’ve seen each other while your dad was on his honeymoon. A (entering): Is my birthday girl home? She sees India's on the phone. I: How are you and Ginger getting along? PAUSE. You can’t expect it to be like it was with us. She’s young enough to be your sister, while I’m almost old enough to be your real mom. PAUSE. Thanks again for calling. I love you too, sweetie, but I don’t know if you should still be calling me ‘mom.’ I’m not even your stepmom anymore. PAUSE. Whatever makes you happy. India hangs up. A: How is Georgia? I: So-so. I wish I could spend more time with her. But her dad... That’s why I stayed away from her birthday party last week. A (her arm around India): You did leave the man for another woman... Now, why don’t we celebrate your birthday? I: You promised. No fuss. A: Right. They exit. We hear, “SURPRISE!” 4 – GEORGIA’S LIVING ROOM Ginger and Kimber are chatting. Georgia enters, a backpack over her shoulder. Gr: Georgia, you remember my friend, Kimber? Ga: Your maid of honor. They say a quick good-bye. Georgia is spending the night at a friend's and won't be back until after Ginger picks up her dad at the airport the next day. K: So? Gr: I can’t believe we’re doing this. K: We’ve got the house to ourselves. Ginger recalls Kimber coming out. It made her “curious.” She can understand Kimber being attracted to other girls. She, herself, has been attracted to girls. Now Ginger, after four short months of marriage to Georgia’s dad, is realizing... Gr: I've denied who I am. Who I want to be with. K: You don’t have to deny yourself tonight. 5 – GINGER & KIMBER MAKING LOVE Afterward... G: I don’t think I can let this be a one-night thing. K: I know, but I don’t want to be your mistress, either. G: God, what will my parents think? K: If it weren’t for his money, they’d been pissed about you marrying Frank. He’s so much older than you. At least, I’m your own age. 6 – INDIA’S LIVING ROOM Ariella closes the door on the last of party guest. She joins India on the sofa. I: I can’t believe you did this. A: I guess you’ll have to spank me. They kiss. I: Maybe I’m too tired now. A: You aren’t so old and tired that you’re going to pass up making love on your birthday. 7 – ARIELLA & INDIA MAKING LOVE 8 – INDIA’S LIVING ROOM (NEXT DAY) Ariella opens the door. Georgia, weeping, shoots past her. Ariella notes India is out running. Georgia had gotten home as Ginger, suitcase in hand, was leaving. Her father was ranting about “Ginger being no different than Georgia.” G: He can't believe he married “another one.” India enters. Georgia runs to her. 9 – INDIA'S GUEST ROOM Georgia lies in bed. India enters. I: I called your dad. He's fuming. I told him you’re 18 now. G: When he was yelling about Ginger, I flashed back to when you and him broke up. It was like losing you all over again. 10 – GEORGIA’S BEDROOM Georgia, with India, is packing. G: Dad's probably taking his frustration out on some little white balls. They discuss his outbursts about gays. I: What are the odds he’d wind up marrying two of them? At least, Ginger didn't take 12 years like I did to figure herself out. G: The way Dad talks about you and now Ginger. It’s scary. I mean, I thought I’d tell him I’m gay just to see how he’d react. I: He’d curse the influence I had on you. 11 – INDIA’S BATHROOM Georgia enters as India brushes her hair. Georgia wants to say good-bye before India goes to work. G: I’ve really missed you. You’re so sweet. So understanding. So smart. So pretty. I: You are all those things. Even prettier. She kisses Georgia on the cheek. 12 – CLASSROOM Prinzzess gets up from her seat to leave, but India stops her. Prinzzess did poorly on the test. I: Is there anything on your mind? You seem distracted. Prinzzess shrugs. I: You know you can talk to me. If you’ve got problems, I’ll listen. 13 – INDIA’S KITCHEN Georgia is rinsing dishes, handing them to India. Ariella sits at the table. She notices Georgia is transfixed on India—leaning in to sniff her perfume, sneaking glances at her as she loads the dishwasher. 14 – INDIA’S GUEST ROOM India wakes Georgia. I: Hey, sleepy head. With all the drama, you and I haven’t had a chance to catch up. I’m playing hooky, taking you out on the town. 15 –INDIA’S LIVING ROOM Ariella opens the door for Prinzzess. The girl heard India wasn’t in school, skipped class and somehow found herself standing here. Ariella says India is out, but her bigger concern is the girl’s quivering. She invites her in. 16 – INDIA’S LIVING ROOM Prinzzess sits on the sofa. Ariella brings her a glass of water. Prinzzess explains "finally getting the courage” to talk to India. She admits having a crush on India - thinks about her day and night. A: I wish I could say something to make you feel better. I’m sure if you talked to... P: You’re so lucky to be with her. I wish I could know what it is like to kiss her. To touch her. When Ariella assures Prinzzess “someday she’ll meet someone,” the young girl interrupts her. P: I thought someday might be today. Miss Summer would see how much I need her. Take pitty on me. Ariella pulls the girl into her arms and kisses her on the forehead. Prinzzess kisses her back. A: You should go. Prinzzess begins weeping. When she rises, Ariella grabs her hand. A: But I can't let you go so upset. The two hug again. As they hold each other, Prinzzess can’t help touching Ariella, kissing her on the neck. The arousal in both women is ignited. A (leading Prinzzess upstairs): I must be crazy doing this. 17 – ARIELLA & PRINZZESS MAKE LOVE 18 –INDIA’S LIVING ROOM (NIGHT) India and Georgia enter. While India goes to find Ariella, we stay with Georgia. She pulls a book off the shelf, knocking a shoebox of photos onto the floor. She's surprised to discover nude images of India. I (re-entering): I found her soaking in the tub. She says we need to “talk.” She sees the photos. G: Don’t be embarrassed. You’re beautiful. I: I can’t believe Ariella talked me into posing for those. G: They take my breath away. Before she can say more, Ariella enters. 19 – ARIELLA & INDIA’S BEDROOM India sits in bed. Georgia enters, saying Ariella left, mentioning she'll be staying with a friend. G: What’s wrong? Is it my being here? I: No. She had to be honest with me. One of my students stopped by. This girl has a crush on me. Was upset. When Ariella tried to “comfort” her, the two of them ended up in this bed. G: I’m so sorry. I: That’s what she said. She said she loves me and if I love her, I'll forgive her. G: Someone who loves you, wouldn’t have hurt you like this. I: I think I'm more mad than hurt. India notes Ariella didn’t just sleep with another woman. She slept with a student. India is genuinely concerned about Prinzzess, “a sweet kid.” Georgia gives India a hug. With a sigh, India declares she wants to put this behind her. She gets off the bed, leaving Georgia sitting there. She starts unbuttoning her blouse, when she notices Georgia staring. G: I could see a student getting a crush on you. I: Really? G: I started sneaking peeks at you when I was 13. Haven’t you ever noticed how many times I’ve said you are so attractive. That’s because I’m attracted to you. I: I had no idea you had those kind of feelings—that you’re attracted to women. That you’re attracted to me. Georgia tells India to see her not as a little girl, but as a woman who loves India and longs to be loved by India. She kisses India. I: Sweetie, I’m not sure this is a good idea. G: The only way you could possibly hurt me right now is to reject me. Wouldn’t you want my first time to be with someone who loves me unconditionally? Someone who loves me the way you do? INDIA & GEORGIA MAKE LOVE 20 – ARIELLA & GEORGIA’S BEDROOM They wake up in each other’s arms. I: So, what happens now? G: Well, I think, first of all, I won’t be calling you ‘Mom’ anymore. NEXT MOVIE Georgia and Ginger? Georgia and Prinzzess or Kimber? Georgia and both stepmothers? Georgia, India and Ariella? Prinzzess finally with India?

02-09-2010, 07:44 AM	#5
Amo Cinaedae GF Cult Follower Verified User Join Date: May 2007 Location: Arizona Posts: 1,998 Rep Power: 253	Nice thoughts, Jo! I have a question and a comment Question: Ginger who? Certainly not Ginger Lee as a mother! Comment: I am happy to see the mention of Kimber. I assume you mean Kimber Lace. She has only appeared a few times with GFF, but has played well. She is the sexiest broom stick I know! I don't mean that to be disparaging but funny, just a reference to the fact that sometimes a very thin girl can be exceptionally hot -- like Kimber! Please bring her back! Cheers __________________ Amo

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02-08-2010, 08:23 PM	#2
Robertttt Les. Erot. Man Verified User Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Milw, WI Posts: 748 Blog Entries: 2 Rep Power: 98	Some good ideas, Jo. Obviously you put a lot of thought into this,& maybe Kay will respond. Oh, & welcome to the forum!

02-08-2010, 10:54 PM	#4
Robertttt Les. Erot. Man Verified User Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Milw, WI Posts: 748 Blog Entries: 2 Rep Power: 98	I hope Kay takes a good look at it. I haven't seen her around in a while, though. There's obviously a lot of dialog & characterizations, so she might want to edit it somewhat, but it could happen. I'll keep my fingers crossed!